by I_am_Me 4 reviewsDelilah gets hit on at work.
Category: Delilah and Julius - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Published: 2006-12-10 - Updated: 2007-08-13 - 622 words - Complete
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Good thing Julius can't hear that. He'd kill the guy! Guess she can't blow her cover off, though, huh? Very good, please update soon! rates exciting
xxDarkness' Kidxx
Ouu Delilah telling a guy off is pretty awesome! You tell that rich jerk boy he's not worthy! Woot!
I like how your chapters are longer now. I was a bit confused about their mission. Maybe more details about it as their thoughts would clarify it? I dunno, just a suggestion. Don't listen to me, I can barely finish my own story.
Anyhow, good story. Keep up the good work, we're all waiting for an update.
yeah! well done, delilah!
very interesting story so far and this carl-guy is very well characterized in these few paragraphs.
can't wait to find out more!
Ha, too funny. Carl was depicted perfectly as the guy who think's he's all that. Wooh! Go Delilah! Tell that sleeze-bag off. ;)
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