Show me someone who says they're able to control their feelings and I show you a bloody liar.
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-13 02:11:59 PMI thought I was the only one who OFFICIALLY channeled Peter?? Clearly you have some how....I think I must have channeled his dog or something because I've been having these urges to sniff people's arses. ANYWAY, on with the review:
I thought this was reall very insightful, hence the rating point. I was enveloped in Pete's mentality and his relationship with Esme, also the reasons why and the justifications of not furthering it.
It was so well written, you truly are gifted, but you're a skank too ( compliment with an insult thrown in to make sure you're head ((hair)) doesn't get any bigger )
Author's responseThe skank says "plonk you" (that could either be "thank you" or... NO. No, I am positive it's "thank you".)
I marry you again because your review makes me feel better about this chapter. :)
(#) CodeWordLove 2006-12-13 04:56:59 PMPete should get paid for all the @ss he gives out in this story. But poor petey he is stuck in some insane room with demented memories. That has to suck. But I love reading it. Oh and I finally put the first part of the squirrel story up if you are intrested. It's in the original:humor section.
Author's responseHa, actually I wondered if Pete should offer Esmé some money. But that felt like too much. Thanks for the r&r!
Yay! I need to read that!
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-12-13 05:30:13 PMyou wanna know something? i'm getting sick of leaving you all of these reviews. it wastes your time. you should be writing. wtf.
nah, i'm just kidding. super-lame joke,i know. but i'm just not strange enough to be non-lame right now.
I wonder why all of the "past events" on the channel are only dealing with his past girlfriends/lovers. surely his family, friends, and other social situations have helped/could help to change him. inquiring minds want to know these things, alex.
and i was just thinking that he hasn't had any present events come on the TV lately. i wonder what's up with that.
i'm so lame...
Author's responseI hope the end of the story will justify/ explain why his past events mostly circle around those three girlfriends/ lovers. His family and friends are mainly there to set the mood. The rest of the story will exclusively deal with present moments (on TV). I just needed some time to elapse so things could develop after Pete's death.
Thanks for the strangely lame review, Crystal! :)
- Once again, you dominated my rating points. Now I only have one :( Points well spent. I just hope no one else updates until Sunday.
Anyway, awesome chapter. It really gave us an insight into his "relationship" with Esme. I think his problem is he takes people for granted. He just assumes they're going to always be there, when the truth is, they aren't. Tsk, tsk Peter. When will he learn?
Author's responseOh well, your points will multiply and thrive, my dear. Just be patient. Actually I'm now trying to show how his attitude towards his former life and all that jazz is slowly changing. Maybe I'm failing at that. :I Oh well... The end is near. ;)
Thanks for your point and comment, Roofie Spice.
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-14 12:43:19 AMFor some reason the system won't let me reply to your review, patrickdance4me. Probably because it's got a boo-boo word in it... ohhhh pet-uh is a whore. hehe. update soon.
-> Yes, and then again... It's probably only human. Aren't we all whores?... I surely hope not.
Actually I have a lot of sympathy for Pete (in this story). Maybe it's just me and I have to blame my sucky writing skills for that.
Thanks for the r&r!
- I love the way you have Pete examining his past, and realising his wrongs. It's so refreshing to see this new side of him. You know you get a point, right?
Author's response:) (This one should say "author's lame response". Or rather "lame author's response".)
(#) xloveorsympathy 2006-12-17 04:05:19 PMPetes such a man whore.
okaysies im done.
i love how this is getting so deep
awesome sweet stuff.
keep it up or i'll send...
er soemthing after you.
Author's responseThank you. I like orchids... oh... I guess you meant send something bad after me. ;)