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Good Morning to You

Monica accidently wakes up Gerard and gets a lovely surprise

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar, Frank Iero, Gerard Way, Mikey Way, Ray Toro - Warnings: [X] - Published: 2006/12/13 - Updated: 2006/12/14 - 1349 words

Reviews

• Love Knows No Age

  (#) GwenMerlon 2006-12-13 07:14:22 PM

  Such a good chapter! I love it... Makes me want a Gerard of my own. :) Keep up the amazing work (I'm going to miss your story over Christmas when I go home)!

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  (#) sleepmylove 2006-12-13 07:24:50 PM

  Very hot!

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  (#) cutegirl12356 2006-12-13 07:39:58 PM

  I love this story and i love you because you wrote it! THANK YOU FOR WRITTING A KICK ASS STORY! CaNt WaIt FoR mOrE!!!

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  (#) myusedromance 2006-12-14 04:49:31 AM

  that was heated...write more and more and more PLEASE :) i really love your story

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  (#) Cerediwen 2006-12-14 09:14:21 AM

  Woo that chapter rocks, and the thing about chocolate chio panacakes and bunnie!!! Awww, and I'm so glad those guys made up.

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  (#) sing4me09 2006-12-14 03:10:42 PM

  YESS!!! I KNEW they would hook up eventually!

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  (#) forgotten-sadness 2006-12-17 11:19:31 AM

  OOOHH HOTT!!!!! Oh my god!!! Gerard has a touch of an angel. I wish he would touch me like that :D Well keep going i'm going to keep readign

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  (#) blitzy 2007-01-27 01:02:24 AM

  omg. i want gerard to do that to me on a sofa. i guess i should keep these things secret. shrugs

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  (#) Meh... 2007-04-14 05:53:13 PM

  Look, hon, it's a good story so far; I've just been sitting here and reading it, and it's a good storyline. A little cliche in some parts, but good.
  
  Two things you really need to work on, though:
  
  When you write sex scenes/makeout scenes/whatever, don't do what so many other writers do. DON'T WRITE IT LIKE A BADLY-WRITTEN PORNO. Not that there are any WELL-written pornos, but you get my point. In real life, it's pretty rare that the whole, "Oh baby, you're so sexy..." thing comes into play. Sometimes people talk, other times it's just sounds. Either way, I beg of you in the future to cut it out with the cliche porno dialogue. It's very annoying.
  
  The second thing is that you barely even seem to realize what decent spelling, grammar, and punctuation is. Honestly, it's difficult to find a single sentence in this fic that doesn't contain at least one error. Once again, I beg something of you...GET A BETA READER OR AN EDITOR. Because all of the mistakes really get to you after a while.

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