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• The Mistake

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-14

  “Her best friend was missing and possibly dead. Her car exploded. She had been shot at.
  Ava wished she had never won the free tickets to the concert. It wasn't worth it.” -> This I found very amusing. The wording I mean. ;) “not worth” is it a slight understatement. I can tell you have a cool sense of humor, ma’am.
  
  "Ah," Patrick said in a low voice, "Sleeping Beauty awakes." -> Ah, just think that the Hatrack is actually saying that to you. shivers Teenage fantasies come true. Or rather, twenty-something fantasies come true.
  
  Yeah, I hope you don’t mind that I just HAD to drop a rating point on this chapter. Your story is plonktacular. I like it lots.
  
  Produce more. Now. NOW. :)

  Author's response

  Thank you foor all the praise! I get really inspired reading it and it makes me keep writing on this story when I should really be studying for finals. (Who cares about psychology, anyway. lol)

• The Mistake

  (#) jessiearei 2006-12-14

  amazing update!!
  i hope wendy isnt dead!
  i think i'll cry if she is! haha
  and Patrick is so sweet!!
  ahh update again soon!!

  Author's response

  :) I can't spoil it for you! Kepp reading. I'm so glad you like it!

• The Mistake

  (#) Frenchie189 2006-12-14

  Holy shit boys. lol. This story is so original. Oh wow. I love it please update.

• The Mistake

  (#) peterpanswore 2006-12-14

  wow. that was awesome.

• The Mistake

  (#) FallOutGrl 2006-12-14

  wow this sounds soooo goood!

• The Mistake

  (#) patrickdance4me 2006-12-14

  oh my god. that sucks so bad. at least patrick was nice and stayed. that is so sad!

  Author's response

  It will get better!!! :) We can't always be sad.

• The Mistake

  (#) whatkatydid 2006-12-17

  What i enjoyed most about this chapter, was her totally realistic reaction to shock. Laughing is so horribly natural when you're in deep shock and it made it feel so real. It was awesome.
  
  Now, what do I have to do to get you writing more ( note that because I'm a loser, I already have a furhter 3 chapters to catch up on.....haha)
  
  waves hand at story
  Be rated !!

• The Mistake

  (#) CoraLiz 2007-01-15

  Patrick. My fav! I'm trying to watch the Golden Globes for a class, but all I can do is pay attention to your story!
  
  Exciting

• The Mistake

  (#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-11

  Did you ever know that you're my hero?
  
  . . . 'cause you are.
  
  :)
  
  xxxxo.

  Author's response

  I am?!?! I'm lucky enough to be someone's hero? Holds self up tall (As far as 5'3 frame will allow) But you know, you're totally my hero too!!! (Along with Fiona and Kate)

• The Mistake

  (#) ssketchator 2007-06-01

  Pete Wentz himself once told me to "let the wang hang." Which is something I do anyway, but I had asked him how anyone could wear boxers with girlpants.
  
  Moral of the story: commando is the way to go.
  
  I love Ava's reaction, I love Patrick's compassion, I love [slash hate] the cliffhanger.
  
  I'm not sure of proper rating ettiquite. Do I tell you, do I not tell you, who knows? I'm rating this puppy.

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