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Fourteen: What happened to Pete

by FrostedGlass 14 Reviews

Often it takes other people to help you realize that you've made mistakes.

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Sci-fi - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2006/12/15 - Updated: 2006/12/15 - 1187 words


  • Channel Hopping

    (#) MMMramen 2006-12-15 09:14:51 PM

    Aw, I feel so bad for Pete. I mean, he's stuck in this room, supposedly "dead" and he's realized that he made some mistakes regarding how he treated his friends. You can really sense progression, you can sense that he has changed. Very well written, my love. I owe you a rating point.

    Author's response

    I think those quotation marks are a bit misplaced there, dude. ;)
    Thanks for making me believe I did a good job on the "personality" change. ;)
    Don't fret it about the points. I know how it sucks when you only have a very limited amount of them at your disposal when you start out. :)
  • Channel Hopping

    (#) MusicxisxHearts 2006-12-16 07:43:49 PM

    Billy Talent!!! WHOOT! At this point, I just want to find out where the heck Pete is.

    Author's response

    You, my friend, have a very good taste in music. Ah well... we're all FOB fans here, right? That was redundant then...
    Don't worry, you'll find out soon. Thanks for the r&r. Love ya!
  • Channel Hopping

    (#) xloveorsympathy 2006-12-17 04:12:03 PM

    okaysies. im not lost on the laura thing anymore. This chapter was wow. while reading that, i was proberly the quietest i was in a long time. i love how you..oh m gee... write! you have an amazing talent!

    i mean it everytime i say i cant wait for an update.
    and i cant wait =]


    Author's response

    :) Thank you very much for this review.
    I'll update soon. I want to finish this story by Christmas. Three more chapters to go. And the last one's been written some time ago.
  • Channel Hopping

    (#) ssketchator 2007-05-15 02:04:12 PM

    I think it fit well.

    You're right, Clandestine is pricey. I get the "reasons" but it's still fun to complain once in a while.

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