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undead girl of the world!

by luvlikewinter 3 Reviews

Living in the world of high school is hard all by its self.But having to deal with the past, the future, your crush, your enemy, parents and friend is just a whole another Plant.Let me know what yo...

Category: Drama - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006/12/14 - Updated: 2006/12/15 - 311 words

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  • Undead Girl Of The World

    (#) xtearcatcherx 2006-12-15 03:21:10 PM

    It sounds interesting, I'm looking forward to reading more!

    Author's response

    Cool! I'm glad you like it. Tell your friends please i want to know what other people think.Thanks!
  • Undead Girl Of The World

    (#) xtearcatcherx 2006-12-15 03:23:27 PM

    It sounds interesting, I'm looking forward to reading more!
  • Undead Girl Of The World

    (#) ebonyrose 2006-12-29 02:31:50 PM

    I really like your writing style. However, your chapters are not really chapters. Don't be in a hurry. The readers will be here, and trust me we can appreciate a chapter that shows the reader took her time weaving her tale more so than a rushed pragraph. Now don't get me wrong. I really believe you have talent, but try taking that talent to the next level. Lengthen your stories. personally I write between ten and sixteen pages per chapter. I am not saying you should do like wise, but I think at least eight pages is a good start. Plus, Im willing to bet longer chapters will get you more reviews. Just my humble opinion. Anyway, keep up the good work!

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