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undead girl of the world!
3 reviewsLiving in the world of high school is hard all by its self.But having to deal with the past, the future, your crush, your enemy, parents and friend is just a whole another Plant.Let me know what yo...
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Undead Girl Of The World
(#) xtearcatcherx 2006-12-15
It sounds interesting, I'm looking forward to reading more!Author's response
Cool! I'm glad you like it. Tell your friends please i want to know what other people think.Thanks!Undead Girl Of The World
(#) xtearcatcherx 2006-12-15
It sounds interesting, I'm looking forward to reading more!Undead Girl Of The World
(#) ebonyrose 2006-12-29
I really like your writing style. However, your chapters are not really chapters. Don't be in a hurry. The readers will be here, and trust me we can appreciate a chapter that shows the reader took her time weaving her tale more so than a rushed pragraph. Now don't get me wrong. I really believe you have talent, but try taking that talent to the next level. Lengthen your stories. personally I write between ten and sixteen pages per chapter. I am not saying you should do like wise, but I think at least eight pages is a good start. Plus, Im willing to bet longer chapters will get you more reviews. Just my humble opinion. Anyway, keep up the good work!
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