Patrick gives Charlie a call.
- Ashton Kutcher. Ha ha
Gossip queen. Hardeharhar.
Mr team naked pics. Mwahhahah
Love your story. And I love Charlie, she IS ballsy. Have a rating point.
Author's responseYay! I'm glad I wasn't the only one laughing...or I'd look pretty stupid. Thanks for the point, I'll take great care of him.
(#) luckysgc921 2006-12-16 05:18:07 AMseeing this updated made me smile. :)
and then reading it made me giggle uncontrolable. my love for patrick is amazingly huge. and patrick being sarcastic and bantery just makes it grow by leaps and bounds.
and as much as it pains me to admit (lol) peter had some of my favorite lines esspecially:
"I know they want equal rights, but now they've gone too far. They're taking our names."
Author's responseOH. MY. GOD. Bridget actually had something nice to say about Pete? Dies
But then again, this Pete is a work of fiction, not the real Pete, so I guess it's OK.
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-16 07:55:18 AMHa, Kyle, you know how to keep me amused. Staining Pete’s perfectly white teeth with (what we hope was) brownie crumbs… Ha ha ha! haHA! :) I’m sooo digging your scene.
Ah, Patrick is the shit. Stupid Peter and his possessiveness of supposedly male names. Right? Right, KYLE??? (Yup, lame…)
HA HA! “How’s her body? Firm?” HA HA!
For reasons beyond my grasping I have to rate this as “funny”.
YOU GOT IT! DoJ… take whatever you want, you got it
Author's responseWas is brownie crumbs? The world may never know. Ah, the art of toilet humor. It never gets old. And not surprisingly, some guy actually said, after I was introduced to him, "Kyle? I know chicks want equal rights, but now you're taking our names. I mean, you never hear of dudes named Amanda, do you?" Weird, huh? Thanks for the rating point, love. It looks dashing on my mantel.
(#) MusicxisxHearts 2006-12-16 07:50:28 PM"I'm sorry about him, Charlie. We think he has Tourettes. We're looking into it."
I almost choked on my Pepsi when I read that. I just love this story, update soon!
Author's responseHA! You got to watch your drink and food intake when you read some of the stories on here. I almost died via an onion bagel while reading. So be careful. Thanks for the review, Rose. :)
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-17 07:01:08 AMKyle, KYLE, KYLE/b> you are so ooberly superly fanatbulously greatest writer of Rock The Cradle of Love Ever. I mean it, no-one esle has written it like you.
I'm currently stuffing munchies in my mouth on a continuous reem, I found this process getting quicker the more Patrick and Charlie's convo went on, until I nearly spat them out.
So the Biscuit scored a date huh? Notice how incredibly Patrick-orientated this place has become over the last couple of months??
Author's responseKaty, I'm not accusing you of anything, but after your review all my other reviews are in bold lettering. Hmmm, interesting. Anywho, yes, I have noticed Patrick becoming the eye-candy around here. And who can blame us...I mean...damn. Look at that boy. I just want to rip all his clothes of and- uh, well, it's not important. I gotta go...
(#) a girl nicknamed Peter 2006-12-20 02:30:47 PMI hope I made you happy... Heheheh. Excellent story (Wayne's world. I was watching it. Awesome movie.) Anyways, you got to add more soon. The more you add the more I (and probabaly many other people) will review more.
I love it! Add more soon! Or the vegetables and fruits of the world will attack you!!!!
Author's responseQuite happy you have made me. Yoda, much? Well, Peter, I enjoyed your Wayne's World reference. I do love that movie. But I do not love fruits and veggies attacking me. I know a few vegans, so I should be OK. Thanks for the review, daaaarling.
(#) pixied_secrets 2007-01-13 01:30:40 PMdear kyle,
i'm sorry i suck balls. i seriously thought i had reviewed this, but upon further inspection, i just suck balls. please forgive me because i love you. and you are funny, and you know it, and i'm late for this game, and i know it.
Author's responseOh Crystal, you don't suck balls...well, I don't know what you do on your free time, but as far as reviews, you definitely don't suck balls. Much looooove, my dear. :O
- "We think he has Tourettes. We're looking into it."
I'm sure that sentence has a more than just a little truth to it. I love Pete's character in this story. He is such a smug asshole. It's hillarious. And yea for shy, stammering Patrick. How cute.