Reality check with Esmé G-something. She's a tough one, Pete. [Next to last chapter, folks.]
(#) luckysgc921 2006-12-20uh-oh. where IS the countdown?
yikes. is that a really bad thing that it disappeared or possibly a good thing? this sudden urge to have Pete back amongst the living id disturbing my usual sensibilities. lol. i love this! plus I wanna see more about mini-pete.
Author's responseGood thing actually. But don't tell anyone. ;)
About mini-Pete... He will be at least mentioned again. That's all I can promise. Thanks for the r&r! :)
(#) rawrlittledino 2006-12-21Oh my gawsh.
I need to know what happens.
Last chapter is next right? WELL UPDATE.
Or I hop on a plane and come and slap you into next week.
Someone buy me a plane ticket?
Author's responseTomorrow, my dear. What do you need a plane ticket for? Can't you swim?
- Agh! Where's the countdown?
This was amazing, of course. The way he just accepts everything he's done wrong now. And a song I've never heard before, the lyrics just sum up what you've been doing with this story so beautifully. I'm away to find it and have a listen. That's how much I adore this story. Have your point, u point thief ;-)
Author's responseIt's a real good song. :) Personally, I like to think of myself as a pick-pocket.
Thanks for the r&r...&r. ;)
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-21It's hard to tell if she was just hiding her pain over my death or if it really didn't affect her that much. Her affection for me could have simply been an attempt at filling the lonliness in her life with a Fall Out Boy. Or THE Fall Out Boy, according to her views. For some reason, I'm in love with this line? I don't even know why....
Author's responseWell, actually that's a line from personal experience. I'm the bad guy though. What else is new?
(#) xloveorsympathy 2006-12-21"Well, that guy at the other table was really hot. Hotter than me. He had respiration after all. That's usually preferred over a dead dude in a hellhole.
i loved it :)
i love how your always painting pictures in my mind. haha that was poetic.
thats about as good as i get.
sad isnt it?
well another great chappie :)
have an amazing christmas!
Author's responseWowie, thanks for that. :)
Have a plonktacular Christmas, too! :>
- Good God Woman. I have to know what is going to happen next. Is this payback for me leaving my story at such a critical spot!? Maybe I should update due to the fact that I now know how it feels.
I don't want this story to be over for I am in love with it. There. I said it. L-O-V-E. Scary.
PS: I DID NOT CALL HIM FAT!!! I SWEAR!!!
Author's response:) Thank you so much.
Yeah. Right... ;) (For some reason assholes find it especially amusing to pick on nice people... Love ya though. ;) )
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