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• Divide and Conquer

  (#) vaiwandil 2006-12-15

  yeah, great! YOu're living up to your name!
  finally an "action-story". might sound stupid but you're so much closer to the series than some of us (including me) are. Refreshing to go back to the roots! I can see this chapter in my minds eye! very well done! don't you dare saying it sucks!

  Author's response

  Thanks. Honestly I just picked that name because it was the first thing that popped into my head. I know that there are much better authors than me out there. If I could I would change it but it's kinda grown on me. lol:P I'm glad to know that I've got some of the facts right, at least so far. I'm glad that you're liking it so far. :)

• Divide and Conquer

  (#) darks00 2006-12-15

  Awww thanks, girl. Anytime. Thanks for sharing your story with us, it's very good, and I can't wait for the update. claps Awesome, please update soon! rates exciting
  
  xxDarkness' Kidxx

  Author's response

  Aww, thanks. blushes I'm really glad that you like it. Especially you because your stories were my inpiration. You are very very talented! I will try to update soon. :)

• Divide and Conquer

  (#) Trinda 2006-12-15

  The story really reminds me of the TV show, wich can be a good thing or a bad thing. The bad thing is that Delilah and Julius seem to get out of the situations way too easily and we don't get to see how they do that. Like how Delilah is burried under the snow but then she's all of a sudden kicking Ice's butt? Don't get me wrong, I though that was a really cute line with how Julius won't kick a girl but Delilah will, but I wanna see more of a stuggle for the characters. That's just my opinion though. And for the good thing? That there's humor in the story and how you thought about certain aspects of the mission, like ie; How in the beginning You have it so the winds are so high the Helicopter couldn't go any father up. It makes the story seem even more impressive. Good job! Can't wait for a next chapter!

  Author's response

  Thanks for your honesty. I will definitely remember to go into detail about how they escape. And trust me there will be plenty of times when they need to escape. I just love to put in twists. :) Thanks for the complements, I'm glad that you like my story.

• Divide and Conquer

  (#) panda_1418 2006-12-15

  Sweet story! I liked the "You wouldn't hit a girl, would you?" bit. HILarious!!

  Author's response

  glad you like it so far. Ya, I thought that line was funny too.:P

• Divide and Conquer

  (#) Trinda 2006-12-15

  Ah ha! Sorry for reviewing again but I love the titles! I read the chapter title while looking at the reviews, "Icey Circumstances"Z Ha! How come I can't ever find cool title names like that.
  And BTW, I ment to say this earlier, but you're really good at writting summeries, it just drew me in.
  
  Oh and you don't have to do in detail about how they escaped, but I'd just like to see how they didn't magically escape if you get what I mean.

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