And I see you lying next to me With words I thought I'd never speak Awake and unafraid Asleep or dead
(#) MyVengefulRomance 2006-12-26 03:50:16 PMHoly God. Both of those chappies were freaking amazing. I'm going to rate this story 'ambiance' because Jesus...your descriptions make me see what Frankie sees, feels, and thinks. I like that in your chapters, you don't use slang, you use descriptive words that paint a realistic picture that maps out the emotion of each and every character. I still love Gerard in this. He's seductive, but it seems that he's almost confused about his own emotions. I love his sheer mysteriousness. (If I got that wrong, I'm sorry.) And poor Frankie! He's so gosh-darn confusered about everything! And who the hell was that creepy-ass kid??? Urgh! You've got me on the edge of my seat and I want...no. I NEED more. Or I will pout like...like someone who pouts! Yeah! Like someone who pouts! Ha. Take that! UPDATE!!!! (Holy God. Longness much? And thanks for the dedication. It made me smile. ;))
Author's responseDear lord girl, you are offically my favorite person in the entire world. I adore you to NO bounds. Sometimes I feel I post just for you because your reviews are amazing.
(#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2006-12-28 07:49:13 AMwow! you put yersel' down too much woman! i actually think it is humanly IMPOSSIBLE for you to write a rubbish chapter!- you're a genius!! :)
Author's responseoooh, you should've seen my stuff from a year or so ago; it was baaaaad, haha. thank you so much though!
(#) AlexSanDee 2006-12-29 11:25:07 PMOk This will be more than a little comment. You are an outstanding writer. When you write it is poetry in motion. (yea, I know thats from a song). I really mean it. I bow to you.
Author's responseOh wow. You flatter me and make me blush X )
Thank you so much; you're so sweet! I really appriciate that.