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Everybody shows their hands
11 reviewsThanks to Sheena, we learn what the former FOBsters are doing these days. And that FG is a moron. *gasp*
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The Curse of the Curls
(#) moocow 2006-12-28
OH EM GEEE
FLASHBACKSSSSSS
i love you alex.
but babies is so 06.
it's time for milkshakesAuthor's response
Ha. If the Queen loves you, you've got it made.
Well, the stuff in italics is always Sheena's POV and the normal font is Kylene.
In Austria it still is 06. looks dumb
I want a vanilla one. lights an ashlee to create a romantic atmosphere (Now, if that bitch only stopped yelling.)The Curse of the Curls
(#) rawrlittledino 2006-12-28
I think I died.
Andy has a cooking show.
I absolutely cracked up at that.
And I'm really not suprised that Joe is a lazy ass.
Probably eats and plays video games for a job.
Ha. That'd be a fun job.
Another amazing chappie. Have a ratey pointy.Author's response
I can see it clearly: Andy, the Chef. Heck, he's a waiter in Katy's new story. ANYTHING GOES!
Actually that kinda sounds like the job he's got now, in 2006 in real-life.
Thank you, generous Izz. You da shizz.The Curse of the Curls
(#) luckysgc921 2006-12-28
giggles...giggles some more
fabulous. completely and totally and absolutly fabulous. That was a really amazing chapter. AND on top of all that I married Joe. lol (as long as it wasn't Pete..shudder)
That really was a great chapter. love this story.
Although Sheena doesn't seem to like Patrick anymore.
rating point :)Author's response
Glad you don't mind your marriage with Joe.
At first my alarm bells rang because I actually wanted to picture Sheena and Patrick in a nice, yet somewhat imperfect relationship. And then I was really grateful for your comment because all of a sudden I thought of something that might actually serve as a plot for this story. (And now I don't have to build it upon loosely connected episodes.)
So, thank you very much for this review, Bridget! :)The Curse of the Curls
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-12-28
Mary Jane?! haha, only joe. haha. wait i'm still laughing... lol that was funny. cant wait for more!Author's response
Thankies!The Curse of the Curls
(#) jessiearei 2006-12-28
haha i love your story!
it cracks me up!
hmm whats w/ the joke between pete and kylene?
update again soon!!Author's response
Very good job on picking up on that. I will explain that at some later point in the story. ;)
Thanks for the r&r, dudester! :)The Curse of the Curls
(#) MusicxisxHearts 2006-12-28
Her Highness Hairball. Very original. :)Author's response
She's a princess. Or thinks she is. ;) Thanks, Rose.The Curse of the Curls
(#) bandgeekfreak 2006-12-30
Mean to Joe much? lol. Eh, everyone does it. Very good (funny) story! ;)
One question though: Will Patrick be totally bald when he's 45??? No one needs to answer that, I just want to know.Author's response
Thanks, mistress. :)
Ok, not answering. Actually I'm more excited to find out what Pete will look like with 45. That's a fun thing to look forward too.The Curse of the Curls
(#) MMMramen 2006-12-30
By the way, thanks for giving me a messed-up daughter. God.
Bridget's fine, thanks. How could she not? Lucky-" he sneezed and it sounded as if he said "sgc921". That minx seems to be sneaking her way into everyone’s stories.
/Hey, everyone!" Kylene greeted the men who grunted in response. "Peter, you look especially hot tonight," she said.
Don't ask.
"Same to you, you little vixen," he replied. / Perhaps I’m being a tad over protective of my namesake, but I am not at all comfortable with this interaction. I know he likes them young, however this is ridiculous.
Can you ask Kylene if she will babysit Mary Jane next weekend? Bridget and I are invited to a party." My God…Joe named his daughter Mary Jane? I am speechless…yet not that surprised.
There might be some wicked pointage.../might!/Author's response
Hm, did I overread Bridget's cameos in other people's stories? Educate me! She is a minx.
Yes, ridiculous. I'll pick up on that later.
Yes, I don't mind being lame.
DoJhuggageThe Curse of the Curls
(#) whatkatydid 2006-12-31
Katy Pollard....hmmmm. personally I would have liked to have seen more of her....Author's response
It's happening, it's happening. Be patient, my wife.The Curse of the Curls
(#) pixied_secrets 2007-01-01
you know what? i really hate being the last to review. it's upsetting. here i am, trying to leave you a rating point, and a nice review...but it's all been done.
maybe i can just leave you some cuss words or something. is that a good compromise?
what about an "i miss you"...? will that do?Author's response
An "I miss you" might get you inside of my pants... and maybe inside of my story.
No cuss words, please. I don't want MY laptop to blow up too.
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