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Part 1

by aiIenzo 2 Reviews

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Category: Kingdom Hearts - Rating: G - Genres: Fantasy - Characters: Axel, Demyx, Larxene, Lexaeus, Luxord, Marluxia, Namine, Roxas, Saix, Vexen, Xaldin, Xemnas, Xigbar, Zexion - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006/12/30 - Updated: 2006/12/30 - 1724 words

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  • Glass

    (#) horsie890 2007-01-02 09:41:41 PM

    This is pretty good. The word Lexaeus' would actually be Lexaeus's. I'm a grammar fanatic that way. The way you first described it, I thought it would be another OC story (I've written about 10 of them, so I sort of like them), but it was a lot better than that. You have real skill with describing things, and you don't make a lot of the common mistakes I usually see. Good job!

    Author's response

    Actually, in proper grammar, when you any word ending with an 's' that needs a possesive 's', you simply put an apostrophe above it, but it IS a still-debated though, haha. And thanks SO MUCH for your kind words; I appreciate them more than you know.
  • Glass

    (#) Tenchi_Kai 2007-02-11 06:45:34 AM

    Wow. I really liked this story. Axel is very in character, and it seems that no one else can really get that right. I enjoyed it; it's going in my favs. ^^;;

    ~Kai

    Author's response

    thank you very much :)

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