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• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) moocow 2007-01-02

  Before I read this, I have to point out two things.
  
  Violence. And Secks.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) moocow 2007-01-02

  So after much reading,
  
  Violence, and Secks.
  
  yes.

  Author's response

  yes.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-03

  /Finally the announcer stated that Fall Out Boy was coming up and Jackson jumped up from his spot on the floor.
  "Jackson, you have to sit down so everyone else can see," Collette said trying to hold in her own excitement.
  Jackson sat down, but continued to rock with enthusiasm./ -> Cute. Such a cute little kid!
  
  "The boys are going to after parties and all I want right now is to be with you," he voice got husky in the phone sending chills down Collette's spine. -> Ach… Patrick and his abilities to make CoCo swoon. And me swoon.
  
  "Oh come on. I can hear the seduction in your voice from here," -> Ha ha. Busted.
  
  If they don't like the beats or the riffs the fans aren't going to give the lyrics a second glance. -> Tru dat. At least for most people. Kudos to you, CeCe.
  
  PATRICK TELL HER YOU LOVE HER ALREADY! Moron.
  
  Or dumbass. Ok… I like that one, too. ;)
  
  HOLY MOZART BALL, BATMAN! Kiefer…. that SOB…
  
  So exciting. So I rated.
  
  Update soon, soon, SOOOON!!! :)

  Author's response

  I keep telling Mr. Stump to stop being a dumbass, but he just doesn't listen! BOYS!
  
  Update will be as soon as I can. Stupid work.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-01-03

  Tell me you're kidding!?? CeCe, you are totally unbelievable, I cannot believe this at all!!
  
  The scene where they were watching FOB at the AMA's, that was so real, I know I would be so nervous too if it was me, i'd probably eat my finger.
  
  And the sex....for the love of Barry Manilow, it was hot. The weird things is, in my update, I do the same thing, you'll know what I mean when you read it - we are connected woman. It's offical.
  
  And Kiefer ( who I keep seeing as Jack Bauer by the way ) well he needs to be taken down, are the dogs partial to human meat? what about live Penises?? Yeah....anyway
  
  I love you. This was awesome.

  Author's response

  We are definitely connected. What will Alex think!?
  
  Love you back!

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) rawrlittledino 2007-01-03

  God damnit.
  That Son=Of-Beech.
  I swear to god woman, Update soon. OR ELSE.
  I want to know who got shot. It better had been Keifer.
  OR ELSE.
  Ackk. I'm scared.
  =[

  Author's response

  Ahhhh! SO much suspense!

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) patrickdance4me 2007-01-03

  cliffhanger much? damn what happened?! ahhhhhhhhh i need to know! hurry and update PLEASE

  Author's response

  I was hoping no one would notice that I left with such a cliffhanger. Ooops. Bats eyes innocently

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) riaryder 2007-01-03

  Hot stuff, lady!
  And talk about a cliffhanger! Has anyone tried to buy the movie rights yet? Because they should! Ah well, all I can offer is a point :-) xx

  Author's response

  Thanks for the point. No movie rights have been sold yet. I'm holding off for a great deal that will pay off all of my student loans.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) MMMramen 2007-01-05

  oooommmgggzzz!!! CoCo! I knew that jerkwad would come back. Awesomely amazing chapter. I love how you forshadowed Kiefer's appearance with the dogs disappearing and the phone calls. Jackson seems like a little fighter, so there better be a kick to the groin in the next chapter. Since this review came a little late, I'll give you a juicy rating point to snuggle with, my dear.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) Subs 2007-01-08

  Hah, great story. I love how Kiefer didnt come suddenly rather you used the phone calls to let readers think " hey wait a minute, somethngs wrong"
  
  anyways..great chapter and can't wait for more

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