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How to teach a new dog old tricks
11 reviewsJoe and Dax meet Caroline and take a liking in her right away. One more than the other. Hey - if she can't take a joke...
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Canine Cupid
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-01-13
I absolutely love this story, especially how clueless Joe is about Dex. I finally got an apartment last semester and decided to make my life complete by getting a scottie puppie. I can definately relate to Joe's problem with coming home to find a mess. When Evie (my puppy) would do that with paper (especially toilet paper, or anything on the coffee table) we'd say she'd thrown us a party (like confetti). We'd get all fake excited and stuff and accidentally taught her it was a good thing to do this (I know, I should know better as a psych major... byt hey).
Anyway, enough about my life... I can't wait for more!Author's response
Ha ha, the mischeviousness probably comes with the name "Evie". ;) So positive conditioning can go wrong when you condition your pet to do a bad thing. But it's a cute story!
Thanks for the doggy chat! :)Canine Cupid
(#) overdosedboy 2007-01-13
AHHHH!!! Hurry and write more, i'm post-poning my writing in hopes that you'll write more!!! man im tired...sorry don't know where that came from but yea please update soon!
Dax sounds really cute!Author's response
:) You're too sweet. I need to leave some reviews on one of your stories because you're leaving one after each Dax chapter...
Thanks for the r&r, dude!Canine Cupid
(#) MusicxisxHearts 2007-01-13
I think Joe's the one that needs the training. Have you seen him on stage?Author's response
Ha ha... Good point. ;)Canine Cupid
(#) luckysgc921 2007-01-13
teenager?! oo la la. risque my dear. ;) fabulous chapter. I liked the interaction between Joe and Carl. Although I don't get why she didn't find him funny...am i weird? lol
loved the chapter. :)Author's response
Yes, 'tis risque. ;) Neither do I. Joe is funny. And if only for his lisp. ;)
Thanks, it was the longest I have ever written. pounds chest proudly I hope noone saw that...Canine Cupid
(#) riaryder 2007-01-14
Joe is such a mong. But in a cute and adorable way. Nicely done, lady.
And the attention span thing was clever. And very funny. It's the wee subtleties that make your stories what they are. Have a point xxAuthor's response
You have just paid me the one of the best compliments in my life. (Why am I such a loser?) :))) hug
Thanks for starting my Joe crush. As a token of my appreciation, you may touch his ear.Canine Cupid
(#) Amaranthea 2007-01-14
Hmmm....mayhap Carl and Brenda lovers be? What will our hero do?!?
Another great story. Love everything you write...and it's great to see the focus on Joe, also. Is this going to fit into the "Bass Files" universe at some point, or is it it's own story?Author's response
Unfortunately, any information concerning the character constellation is classified as of now. ;)
Thanks for reviewing and especially for being a faithful reader. :) That is very cool of you.
Ha ha, I surely didn't plan on connecting this one to the Files or the Curls but since you pointed it out, I just might. We'll see. It's a story of it's own though.
This review makes me like you very much. Be afraid. ;)Canine Cupid
(#) LOVELA 2007-01-14
I must say that this story continues to make me smile. It makes me want a puppy!!! And you make Joe completely adorable. I may want one of those too...Author's response
I want a Joe, too. You can have the dog.Canine Cupid
(#) patrickdance4me 2007-01-16
awesome as usual. my electricity has been out since friday so now i have to catch up with everything :[ but i picked this one to start with. seriously this is awesome and cute!Author's response
Awww, you are so awesome and cute yourself! Are you sure you're not a puppy? ;) Thank you very much for the r&r. :)Canine Cupid
(#) Cucumber 2007-01-17
One thing about the dog training. You may never, ever push down their butts at such a young age. Their bones are still growing and by pushing down on the backs you could damage their bone structure.
I have two young dogs and they learned to sit and lay by us giving them dog candy everytime they did something we said they should.
Anyway, I like the story. It's really good.Author's response
Yup, we don't want that to happen to Dax. Thanks for the info. :)
Thanks for stopping by and reviewing.Canine Cupid
(#) torpedooo 2007-04-27
ohh snap, Carl's with a teenager?? craddle robberrrr! haha, no, i'm just kidding. speaking of her nickname, is it pronounced like the man's name Carl? or like Carol? i'm not too sure if i like her too much yet, seeing as how she was bitchy to joe. but i guess we'll see where it goes.
great chapter!
favorite line:
"Ha ha, did you see that 'Beethoven' movie? You know, the dog called 'Beethoven'? You must love that one," he snickered.
hahaha! joe's such a nerrrrrrd.Author's response
It's pronounced like "Carl". Ha ha... yeah, she is kinda bitchy. I guess she doesn't think the fro alone makes him irresistible.
So again, thank you so much for your reviews. Sorry it took me a few days to reply. I haven't updated (the last chapter's still not done) in forever I haven't checked for reviews either.
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