Sheena engages in time travel in her thoughts and in another conversation with Mystery Man. [The crappy author of this story has finally worked in some cameos she promised people centuries ago.]
- Alex, my love, you've out done yourself.
Author's response:))))))) Yay. Wait... you're probably talking about the part that Rose wrote. Ah well. This is my account. I take credit! MAAAWAHAHAHAAA!
I don't know how to express how much this review means to me. Wait... I think I just thought of something: Let's make little Vefrugrans?
(#) jessiearei 2007-01-15 02:08:22 PMim sure i would pretty much die if someone told me patrick got hit by a truck and died! but that whole b-day thing was sweet! great update! i loved it!
Author's responseYeah, death is definitely not something to kid about. But it was a guy doing it so who's surprised?
- There better not be any impure thoughts going on there Mrs Stump.
And Pete's old saggy man ass still wearing girls jeans! HA
I could give you a point JUST for the purple cowboy boots, lady :-)
Author's responseYeah, better not...
Why, of course, that's pretty much the only thing he's got left.
Thank you very much for the r&r. You know how to boost my ego. :)
(#) MusicxisxHearts 2007-01-15 04:14:30 PMYeah! You found a way to work my insanity into the plotline! OK, it wasn't that insane, but seriously, who jokes about getting hit by a car?!
Author's responseWhat you sent me is super stuff! And that's why I will work bits and pieces into this story as we go along to finally add some quality to this crap.
The car thing was pretty insane, let me tell you. ;) Thanks again for helping me out! :) And for reviewing.
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-01-15 07:23:19 PMWell, hot damn, I finally got to give a point! You and Rose are brilliant writers, and I honestly started highlighting everything I thought was clever/funny to leave a nice, thought-out review but there just happened to be too much, so all you get is this super-amazing paragraph. (Okay, so I like to toot my own horn, so sorry.) Also, I'm finally starting to read some of the past works of yourself and other DoJ members and I must say that I'm begining to understand more of the jokes. :) Clever, clever. I'm excited about the next chapter... get rid of that writer's block ASAP!
Author's responseThanks for the point! :)
Rose is brilliant but from what I can tell, she's horribly underrated.
Oh yeah, the whole history of plonk, pot roast, etc. ;) The DoJ girls are amazing. And so are you. :) Thanks for this review, it's very much appreciated.
(#) whatkatydid 2007-01-15 11:23:02 PMAlex!! Amazing chapter, purple cow boots - did i tell you I live in those things, except they're not purple.
Seriously though, on a 'Reasons-why-we're-so-close-level' this was a great chapter and I was absorbed in it. I can totally relate to everything Sheena's going through, even though I don't know why( yeah....explain that..) But she seems displaced at the moment and without getting you to divulge anything with my utter charm, I guess I don't know all the reasons either. My sentences are very long today, please accept my Britishness with some apology.
You are gifted, I mean that. I'd kill to write half as decent as this and I'm not even joking.
You are a troll! I mean...a doll!!
Author's responseHa, caught you while I'm replying to reviews...
I saw this woman with purple cowboy boots at the train station yesterday and I was like, "Hey... Pete would wear those."
There was a time when I felt like Sheena's feeling now (minus the daughter part) and I probably do still do so every now and then. And funnily enough, if you would have asked me for a reason then, all I could have come up with is probably "nostalgia". BUT Sheena's stressed out, mainly because of Kylene. And Patrick's not much of a help. But frankly, I should've elaborated more on the why, yes. Not sure I can do that convincingly though.
"Gift" = "poison" in German. And that's probably what you really meant. :P Love you. huggage
(#) luckysgc921 2007-01-15 11:38:26 PMlove this! so much! dances around giddily I'm on such a high right now! only its allllllll natural. or at least FOB induced. :)
You're probably thinking of a younger version of my hubby while you're doing your boyfriends.* this made me giggle, cause been there done that. my (now ex's) boyfriends sucked. in general. at life. Patrick doesn't.
ohhhhh! and dude---Kylene-boot camp. totally could work.
Author's responseHa ha. You do seem high. ;)
Still, to me Patrick is... asexual? Like, he's too much of a cute teddybear for me than to imagine him doing... than to imagine he has actual genitalia. Patrick is my Ken DOLL. Yes, that's it.
Ha, Kylene in a purple-cowboy boot-camp. Good thinking, ma'am.
Thanks for your review! You always make me smile.
(#) Amaranthea 2007-01-16 10:26:31 AM"You're not boring me, Sheena. You know, I don't feel indifferent towards you. I have known you for a long time now. And if you feel that you have nobody but me to talk to about this, then I feel honored."
Dum dum dum!
I'm getting the feeling that Petey is going to be confusing Mrs. Stump here in the very near future...
I like how you have Sheena not be completely clueless about what her daughter is doing (the DNA shots). But the Veggie people are just plain old crazy....
Author's responsePete? Perhaps. ;)
Of course Sheena's not clueless. Kyle may be her baby but Sheena is my baby and I'll be damned if that brat of hers is smarter than she is.
Thanks for the r&r!