well hear you go i have been working on this and this is my first mcr story ever so be nice. I'm not sure what it is about yet but i like the being and i think i have an idea of were I'm going to t...
wow. you describe things really well. it created a good mental picure in my head. for your 1st mcr story this is pretty damn good. can't wait to read more! =P
i dont think i will keep going. i have no isperation on were the story is going.=]
whoa for a beginer your awesome! Left me on the edge of my seat! MORE! oh and can't wait for more!
thanks for the awesome review i am starting to write the next chapter today i think it will be up by Friday at the latest.
OH MY GOD!! i loved it!! and thaks for reveiwing my story, i added a new chapter too! But i tottally love your story!
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