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I Told You So

by moogle-lu 2 Reviews

Wakka musing about Lulu and her emotions. Drabble originally written for a challenge on LJ.

Category: Final Fantasy X - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst - Characters: Lulu, Wakka - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2005/08/23 - Updated: 2005/08/23 - 109 words - Complete

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  • I Told You So

    (#) fyre_byrd 2005-10-02 06:53:22 PM

    Again, I like this brief drabble for exploring Wakka's point of view. He's such an amiable pushover in the game. I am glad you let him be a little more fesity here.

    My one criticism is that the last line reads a bit oddly. It almost sounds like Wakka is asking this question to himself or that the point of view has suddenly shifted to Lulu at the end. I suggest "Do you even say 'I told you so' to yourself?"

    As always though, that's just my opinion.
  • I Told You So

    (#) helluin 2006-04-09 12:14:06 AM

    Ouch. Ouch. Ouch. Poor Wakka. Good simple insight into their dynamic.

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