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Defeat

Takes place during Wakka and Lulu's teenage years in Besaid. No spoilers or romance. Drabble originally written for a challenge on LJ.

Category: Final Fantasy X - Rating: PG - Genres: Humor - Characters: Lulu, Wakka - Published: 2005/08/23 - Updated: 2005/08/23 - 100 words - Complete

Reviews

• Defeat

  (#) fyre_byrd 2005-10-02 06:48:28 PM

  This is a very effective drabble. You have the hang of using words sparingly, but to excellent effect.
  
  I only have one question: how does Lulu play in all of those belts? Heh, just kidding. You'd think the game designers would either a) dress the female characters more practically, or b)give them a change of clothes every now and again when they need to be especially active. But of course, you'd think wrong.
  
  I enjoy this story mainly just for the fact that Lulu gets to beat the boys. She seems to me like she would have been a tom-girl growing up.

• Defeat

  (#) TK 2006-02-05 06:25:36 PM

  heheheh kawii... I like it. It short, simple, and cute.

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