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Payback

Revenge is a dish best served...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance - Characters: Bill Weasley, Draco, Dumbledore, Ginny, Harry, Hermione, Narcissa, Neville, Peter, Ron, Voldemort, Other - Warnings: [!!] [?] [V] - Published: 2007/01/28 - Updated: 2007/01/28 - 11612 words - Complete

Reviews

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) maidros 2007-02-07 03:05:27 PM

  Excellent chapter! Dumbledore's advice regarding Susan was funny, but the part about Longbottom taking out Goyle was scarily amusing.
  
  I hope you do not my pointing out a trivial thing, but Prof. Vector is a female (arithmancy witch, Ron calls her in PoA), so the first name of Charles maybe a little off.
  
  The chapter was exciting, and I hope to see another chapter soon.
  Regards,
  Maidros

  Author's response

  Glad you liked it chapter 30 now up. I made Vector a man in this one. Maybe at some point I'll go back and change it to Charlene or something.~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) TwinTailsSpeed 2007-02-09 07:20:12 PM

  This is a excellent chapter update, can't wait for the next one.

  Author's response

  Glad you liked it. Chapter 30 now up.~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) GryffindorDragon 2007-02-20 10:46:53 AM

  So Neville's turned a bit dark. Nice revenge on Goyle.

  Author's response

  Thanks!~Jim

• To Fight the Coming Darkness

  (#) LabRat 2009-04-14 06:07:26 PM

  I know that it's a little late, and a moot point, but thought you should know that Professor Septima Vector is a woman. Any way, I loved this chapter. Revenge is a dish best served with no witnesses and no evidence. Nice cover up with the gum. I am a little worried that Neville might become a little too kill happy.

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