It's kind of short, but it's to the point. Ish. Anyway, I hope you like it, it's a little different from what you are used to from me. Let me know what you think, si vous plait?
(#) squeakyfromme 2007-01-28 10:46:44 PMOMG. I'm so glad I clicked here instead of going to bed. huggles back! I love this whole story, but I LURVE this chapter muchly. FTW JE:MUSICAL REFERENCE. flails Aw, poor Bden, we've both got him pining over girls. XD And the ending line- perfect! runs around squealing
Author's responseYay! You got it! I was going to have him call her "Mustard seed" or "Little Elf" But I really couldn't see him calling her that. So, it was "Second Self" and "Little Sparrow". Oh yes, he definitely does have a bit of a girl problem. And it was actually the ending line that inspired me! I was looking in my songs on the computer and I saw "But it's Better if you do" and I knew I had to use it! Squeal away! joins in Weeee!
- I love it :) Who else loves her Ryan? looking forward to more update soon.....
Author's responseYay! I think that soon, you'll find another little surprise. :) But I don't think it's going to be what you think it is. But thank you for reviewing!
(#) trophywives 2007-01-29 03:01:02 PMahhhh i love it, what a great idea. excited to see if there are any twists =) awww, after hearig brendon say all that i hope elly says yes. oh, and way to tie in a song title with that lol!
Author's responseYay! You love it! That's great! I will guarantee that there is a twist! What is the twist you ask? Well you're just going to have to wait and see. and thanks about the song title! I thought it was rather brilliant, but sometimes I think a lot of things are brilliant when they really aren't. whistles while she works