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The Epic Saga of Natalia Lazarov

by KingJohn23 1 Reviews

The Russian Revolution of 1917 (and beyond) seen through the eyes of Natalia Lazarov, the Tsar's personal chef.

Category: Historical - Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure - Characters: - Published: 2005/08/28 - Updated: 2005/08/28 - 4277 words

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The Epic Saga of Natalia Lazarov

(#) TamerTerra 2005-08-28 01:53:44 PM

Though your dialouge is very strong, you do seem to rely on it a little too much. Work on your description, and I'm sure that you'll see a big improvement in your writing.

All together this is much more readable than it was broken up in the forum.

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