Patrick's grown suspicious over the last couple of days and confronts one of his friends. Luckily for us, Kyle hardly ever does what she's told.
(#) Amaranthea 2007-02-07 07:38:08 AMAh, maaannnnnn....and I was rooting for Pete, too. Bah. Now I'm going to have to say it's Joe, being as FG has recently developed a bit of a crush on the fro'd one....
Poor Patrick! And yet at the same time....what a jerk! Semi-cheating on Sheena...and then getting all territorial over her! Men.
Author's responseYou are one cool reviewer, ma'am.
(#) whatkatydid 2007-02-07 07:59:16 AMARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! just....JUST ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
1stly- The bookmark gag was classic. Slightly disgusting but the humour was overriding the pee-ridden bookmark...
2ndly - I had a paper to copy off the internet. Now I know how you're passing all these finals.....
3rdly - The next thing I knew was that Dad started beating the crap out of Pete.When I actually step back and think about this phrase " Beating the crap out of" I only really just got it today....and hope he didn't.......because if he did then Joe might wanna take a hole of Dax incase he eats it....Dogs do that yo....
4thly - "Don't play the innocent on me, dude! I know what's been going on with you and Sheena. Don't you dare denying it!" What I'd give for Patrick to say those words to me....
5thly - mean, first of all, kudos to her. At her age and all. Not bad. Then again, YUCK! At her age and all. And poor Dad. Poor, poor Dad. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!
7thly - And it said 'A Fall Out Boy says sorry'. ........I think I know....ah hha hahaha
Author's responseThanks for taking the time to list again. I am a horrible lag with that.
All I will say is: ... rly?
(#) bridget 2007-02-07 01:17:56 PMhey...i can't log in 'cause I'm at work and that would ruin the subterfuge of this. mission impossible theme
...patrick beating the ever loving shit out of pete is something I would sell tickets..no..BUY tickets to see.
then I'd kiss pete and make it all better. but isn't it typical (and realistic) that patrick beat the crap outta pete and yet HE'S the one that needs the doctor.
soooo it's not pete. I didn't think it was pete. (is it really not pete?) Pete is too good of a friend to Patrick. He lurves him too much.
btw Ima smack a bitch if Sheena's cheating on Patrick with my hubbie ;) so therefore it must be Andy. You're gonna go all full circle aren'tcha? that's cute. but everything you write is cute and adorable and fluffy bunny..and and and and...and I'm done now.
umm...my point, should I ever choose to get there is: Patrick is a silly head. Kylene's teacher seems creepified. Sheena is a dolt to ever ever everrrrrr wanna cheat on the hatrack. Kylene for once proved useful in that she provided a source of exposition that we otherwise wouldn't have had.
and Pete just brought the pretty...note the use of past tense 'cause I'm sure his face is gonna look like mangled hamburger and not be pretty for a while now.
alright now I'm off to the glamerous world of the music industry insert sarcasem right about here to call more potential sponsors.
Author's responseTom Cruise is a wimp compared to you. Unless he's got his Scientology armada behind him maybe...
Yeah. Patrick's really upset because it's HIS Sheena he's talking about. So my story abounds with psychos. Well, we all put parts of our real life into what we write, don't we?
Right, I must point out what Pete looks like after the Trickster assault.
Thanks for breaking the rules of the working man. ;) Love ya!
- I'm still waiting to find out who the boy is! You seriously driving me crazy. I'm sure that is your plan, however. Have the one who studies mental health have problems with mental health herself. I knew it.
Kyleene is the reason I don't want to have a girl. She's a snoopy, drama filled brat. I love her in this story though. Just not for me.
Smooches you darling DoJie you. Ratings too.
Author's responseHey, that's perfect! So you can try out the theories you learn on yourself! ;)
Totally agree with you on the Kylene/ daughter issue. I wanna have a son/ sons too for that reason.
Smooches back! Thanks for your lovely reviews, CeCe.
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-07 01:56:21 PMAhh! This chapter was just grand...
The bookmark bit was sooo funny, and especially the part with her blaming it on Wiggy. I have to admit, though, that I probably would have done the same thing. I love that girl/fictional character!
And I can't believe Patrick would stoop to seeing that gasp annoying teacher! I'm extremely disapointed in him. Sheena on the other hand at least has the excuse that she kissed another member of FOB. If I was in her position, I'm sure I'd have a hard time keeping my lips to myself, too. And the chapter title fit so nicely. I can't imagine Patrick ever beating up on ol' Pete... okay, that's a lie, I could totally see it as you wrote it! lol Anyway, have a point, and go write some more!!!
Author's responseThanks for the praise on Wiggie. She's the only reason I'm staying in Austria. Hoping that she comes back soon, of course.
Ha ha. Patrick bad, Sheena good. ;)
Peter is a wonderful name that suggests itself to so many word play thingies. (Still far from Patrick - Hat Rack though...)
Thanks for taking the time and writing such a wonderful review again, Gwen! :)
- Aha, so one boy down, only two left. MM who could it be?
It has to be Joe! It has to be. Because Andy has a weird S+M thing that Sheena has already been victim to. But then, that was an alternate universe, sooo......
Oh, holy crap, lady! You've got me all in a tizzy with your suspensefulness :-)
Author's responseHa, I almost titled the chapter "One down, two more to go". ;)
I'm not sure how to incorporate Andy's perversion into this story. I just might not mention it at all.
Suspenders are always good. (Sound like something Wiggie might say?) Thank you for your encouraging review, dear.
(#) jessiearei 2007-02-08 01:36:57 PMahhh!! i think it's andy!!! but im not for sure. cuz its not pete. and idk it just doesnt seem like joe would like sheena like that. hmm now you got me wondering!! update again soon!!! i need more!! haha
Author's responseThanks for your emotional involvement. ;) And the review!
- I haven't read yet, but judging from the title, I'm a little excited. There better be a baseball bat, a blindfold, and a very tied up bassist involved in this chappy.
Author's responseI had a smiliar picture in my head. Unfortunately, it didn't make it onto the screen.
- Whoa! There was no baseball bat. Or a blindfold. Or a tied up bassist. So, the mystery man isn't Pete? And Patrick's banging teacher...metaphorically speaking, I mean. I can't seem to wrap my mind around this. Alex, what have you done to me!?!?!
Author's responseI know, I disappoint. ;)