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It's like #2 to 'The Runner'.
- Wow. I liked this. I liked it a lot. I felt there was a lot of passion and feeling in this one that I was moved by your words. Nice work!
There are still some edits you can make in terms of spelling throughout the poem, such as approaching and awakening. A quick run through edit of this would make it less jarring to us spelling obsessed people. :P