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Chase me if you can

by JoelFight 2 Reviews

It's like #2 to 'The Runner'.

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2007/02/07 - Updated: 2007/02/08 - 188 words - Complete

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  • Chase me if you can

    (#) MarkPoa 2007-02-11 10:18:26 PM

    Wow. I liked this. I liked it a lot. I felt there was a lot of passion and feeling in this one that I was moved by your words. Nice work!

    There are still some edits you can make in terms of spelling throughout the poem, such as approaching and awakening. A quick run through edit of this would make it less jarring to us spelling obsessed people. :P
  • Chase me if you can

    (#) Level27freak 2007-02-15 12:21:45 PM

    Wow. I really enjoyed it. I wish i was that creative. You have talent, you should definitely write more poems.

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