Sometime went by after the last events that messed up with Pierre's life happened and, as always, things never remain the same. When his life starts changing one more time, he realizes that the rea...
(#) catlover070904 2008-06-02 04:54:23 AMThe plot idea was great, the summery was great, but the story, well, it would have been just as great if it weren't for the bad English. I am sorry, I really did enjoy it, but it was just so hard to read and understand in certain points because the English was mixed up and the grammar was bad. I know that English might not be your first language, but with a beta (someone to read and correct your story), this story could go very far.