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When...

how do you truly feel and think when nobodys around...

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2007/02/14 - Updated: 2007/02/14 - 114 words - Complete

Reviews

• When...

  (#) greektitan 2007-02-18 03:01:12 PM

  omg wow,that was really,nice and true,scusidle,but very good,adding it to favorites

  Author's response

  Thnak you! that means alot to me that you said this... and that you even read it! I was just writing what I felt at the moment... and that others can relate to how I feel at times... even though I lock it all up... well thank you again for the review

• When...

  (#) Ninsaneja 2007-02-18 07:20:29 PM

  Needs work in terms of spelling, grammar, general form and format. Not that I don't like it, but just trying to give a pointer or two. Missing a word or misspelling a word can wreck a poem's impact and entertainment value.
  
  Keep writing.

  Author's response

  Hey thanx... I understand what your saying ... and I'll keep that in mind... thank you for the review

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