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how do you truly feel and think when nobodys around...
(#) greektitan 2007-02-18 03:01:12 PMomg wow,that was really,nice and true,scusidle,but very good,adding it to favorites
Author's responseThnak you! that means alot to me that you said this... and that you even read it! I was just writing what I felt at the moment... and that others can relate to how I feel at times... even though I lock it all up... well thank you again for the review
- Needs work in terms of spelling, grammar, general form and format. Not that I don't like it, but just trying to give a pointer or two. Missing a word or misspelling a word can wreck a poem's impact and entertainment value.
Author's responseHey thanx... I understand what your saying ... and I'll keep that in mind... thank you for the review