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Chapter 3: The Warning

by Lourdes 2 Reviews

Time is running out for the team. Hunted and exhausted, they must move quickly if they hope to succeed. Of course distance doesn't always help when fleeing, and there is always the fact that an e...

Category: Naruto - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance - Characters: Chouji, Gaara, Hinata, Ino, Iruka, Itachi, Jiraiya, Kakashi, Kurenai, Naruto, Neji, Rock Lee, Sakura, Sasuke, Shikamaru, Tenten, Tsunade - Warnings: [!!!] [V] - Published: 2007/02/14 - Updated: 2007/02/15 - 3837 words


  • A Promise to Keep

    (#) Entilzah 2007-02-15 06:28:03 AM

    In general, a good chapter with an excellent plot twist. The "acid trip" did seem a little disjointed and hard to follow, but from what I have heard, bad trips are like that!

    You did a good job of leaving this reader with a "WTF is going on?"

    Ero Sennin following the team makes perfect sense. Tsunade is a bit of a stretch given her position and sense of responsibility. But I can see it go either way!

    All in all, another fine chapter!

    Author's response

    The "trip" was hard to write seeing as I've never had a psycotic episode and didn't know really how to approach it. ;) But I gave it my best.

    Thanks for the feedback on the rest! I really appreciate it!
  • A Promise to Keep

    (#) marikunin 2007-02-15 07:16:37 AM

    :: faints ::

    Author's response

    LOL! Are you sure you can take it?
    Okay, so the ghost thing did work - if you can call him a "ghost". (You actually made me nervous when you made that request. I thought I might have to re-think my plot to stay original! Then I asid to hell with it and put it up anyway.) But... I don't think you could say that it was "funny"... ;)

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