(#) grossclout 2011-01-21I am saddened that you have seemed to give up on this story. I've found it original (at least to my reading) and fairly well-written (except for a few spelling errors). I've enjoyed reading the existing chapters and hope that inspiration once again strikes and you will have the time to continue. I eagerly look forward to future chapters.
(#) Coyote2012 2012-01-05I really appreciate a good dimensional travel story, and this one is fantastic. You've taken some of the great fundamental questions everyone seems to pose and addressed them in a very original and effective manner. I hope you choose to eventually finish this story, but understand that inspiration is often fleeting.
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