the brothers Way
(#) AlexSanDee 2007-02-19 05:49:58 PMThat was so fucking good. Shit I just used the F word. Oh man then I said Shit. Ok your story has me so entranced I'm not sure what I'm saying. When Mikey called his brother a Fag the emotion was so raw. Please update soon. Hell I'll pay someone to type for you. I have to know where this is going.
Author's responsegood to know that I can make people cuss, haha. Thanks for the review, it means a lot.
(#) Reign_Madden 2007-02-20 05:29:10 AMThat was a great chapter, the emotion in there was...OMG!It was good I lack the vocabulary to describe it. I can't believe Mikey's behavior(bless him) or his language. I'm sorry to hear about your wrist I hope you get better soon
Author's responsethank you :)
oh, that Mikey...
(#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-02-20 11:49:28 AMI have a problem where i have to read out to myself whenever i read stuff, even if it's only in a whisper, i can't take in stories without doing that and my breath caught in my throat so many times as i was reading this -it was that fucking great- that it took me pure ages to read.
(#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-02-20 01:39:43 PMWow. My heart, ouch. You just ripped my heart out and then stomped on it! cries It's just...you add these little, unimportant details that don't need to be there but just are...and they make this story all the better! I can't explain it. The word 'ambiance' was coined for you! I swear. Mikey had better apologize to Gee in the next chapter! I'm gonna punch him. And hard. And, what the hell were you talking about? 'The beginning starts out crappy'????? YOU'RE CRAZY!!!!! It started out great and got better and better and better!!! You're amazing. I love you. And will you PLEASE update soon! Even though this is worth the wait...UPDATE!!!!
P.S- ONLY SIX MORE DAYS UNTIL I SEE MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE!!!!!!! shrieks
(#) juniper137 2007-02-20 08:03:23 PMhello! i'm a new reader =]
thank you SO much for updating, even though you were/are in pain.
this is getting better and better, which is saying a lot because it started out pretty amazing...
the reference to Cell was really cool because i just bought that book yesterday--all the more incentive to start it right away.
All these references to birds (and the quote from earlier about the bird about to die a lonely life) are really getting to me, as i can't figure out where they're going!
And the last bit with the interaction between the way brothers hit me straight in the heart. owie.
this has been a ridiculously long review...and it's looking even more ridiculous, as it's about 11 at night and i still have a civics paper to write. whoops.
Author's responsewell howdy-do.
Ha, isn't Cell amazing? Yeah, I totally wasn't reading it while writing this [shifty eyes]. And yes, the birds are very important, and I'm GLAD they're getting to you, because that's part of their purpose, haha.
And that was exactly the reaction I was hoping for with Gerard and Mikey; glad I got it across.
Thank you so much for your lenghty review! I just love long reviews (and new readers)
(#) sleepmylove 2007-02-20 08:19:25 PMAs always, your words beg me to listen to my own thoughts with sharp hearing. I will undoubtedly lie in bed for hours contemplating emotions previously unrecognized and lament...
Author's responseOh, wow, thank you so much! I'm really really happy about the emotional response I'm getting from this.