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Open the Door

by JesusKetchum31 4 Reviews

A death brings everyone back to Pallet down, and the people who suffer the most realize that they are not the ones who should.

Category: Pokemon - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Ash, Mewtwo, Misty, Other - Warnings: [!!!] [?] - Published: 2005/09/13 - Updated: 2005/09/14 - 1350 words - Complete


  • Open the Door

    (#) Gabi_Texi 2007-02-05 08:49:03 PM

    My my... Ash died. The grass was greener before I had read this story. Culminating was the moment I noticed the beautiful, poetic yet simple way you detailed the story, comrade.

    Ash had a unique charm to him, even though he was rather cocky at times. I deeply respected him once I saw him on TV when I was 8, and I still respect him now.

    Pff, listen to me! I sound like someone in my family had actually died...

    Anyway, God bless you and Ash,
    Gabi Texi
  • Open the Door

    (#) facia 2007-04-02 04:14:26 PM

    A really interesting and well written story, and depressing as well. You might want to think twice about some of your word choice, though. A lot of the words you used for speech were pretty inappropriate for your tone or just inaccurate generally, which is a shame because the writing is otherwise very good and your characterization of Mewtwo intriguing.
  • Open the Door

    (#) TheGoldenPokemon 2013-06-02 07:37:14 PM

    That was pretty touching.

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