There is only one bad thing that I can say about this story. And that it is at an end. This was absolutely amazing.
The final fight scene? I couldn't look away (though "it's just a flesh wound" did go through my head once). Hinata being the one to finally take him down? Totally appropriate. The final graveyard scene? Poignant and totally in character. The "coronation"? I felt pride along with all his mentors and friend.
You have created a wonderful piece here, and should be very proud of it. Even though I know nothing at all of Final Fantasy, I am tempted to read your next work anyway just to follow you work.
Author's responseThat means sooooo much to me! No, really. You have no idea how thrilled I am to hear you say that. You just gave me the a great birthday present! Yep, today's my birthday! :)
I'll be back with more stoties; make no mistake about that! ;)
(#) applegreen 2007-02-23;_;
I don't want it to end! I love your stuff. this is my favorite fanfic series. I can't find a single bad thing to say about it and you ended it! You have to make more stuff.
Author's responseI'm sorry! But the DESERVED a happy ending, don't you think? I couldn't torture them forever? (Well, I could...but then I'd be a sadist!)
I'll write more, I promise. I love writing too much to NOT write anything else! Keep an eye out. I hope to release my next story within the week.
(#) reinsultrul 2007-02-27The best rating description I can think of is 'Mind-Blowing'. I just can't seem to come up woth a better one-two word description that covers it all, even though putting it that way seems a little grandeous.
The plot was definately new, but it also draws the reader in really well, like the reader's actually there, not just on the outside watching the pictures their imagination creates for your story; and the emotions pulled out, the twists and turns weren't really what I'd thought they'd be, it kept surprising me and showing me something I never would have thought could go with the characters. I didn't want to have to stop reading it for something as silly as sleep or school. Your story combined most of the good rating descriptions, it was impossible to choose ONE that really fit properly.
...Well, heh, I guess that was a little over-board, but that's basically it. Sorry if it's a bit much.
Oh, this is from the review that said I couldn't think of any one rating that really fit so I chose the closest one.
Author's responseWell wow. Saying 'thank you' to a review like that seems kind of pointless and understated. I feel like I should be giving you a hug instead! XD
- AWSOME HINATA IS HARD CORE! >,< she brings new meaning to the tern "fight for your man" it was an awsome fic like the first and I hope to read more of your work again soon. ^_^
Author's responseThat's because I believe that even though Hinata is a sweet and gentle little thing, deep down she's a loaded gun just waiting for someone to pull her trigger! ^_^
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