"I see all of you"
(#) xsnail. 2007-02-25 09:41:21 PMeveryday when i get home from school, i check to see if you have updated.
and then again late at night before i go to bed.
and everytime i see that you have, i get really excited, because i know that whatever you have written will be wonderful.
you write so extremely well.
i love every moment of it.
AND eeee!! what is going to happen with Mikey?? i'm all worried now :P
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-02-26 12:31:24 AMwell.. excellent. amazing. beautifull. thats pretty much all i guess. all characters are so fuuuuuckin real, its almost unbeliavable.
BUT DONT LET MIKEY GET EATEN BY VAMPIRES! :-o
lol, no, write it the way you want it but write it as soon as you can, cause i cant wait to read it! [:
(#) xxtakexmyxhandxx 2007-02-26 02:57:13 PMdamn, shit, fuck, cunt, bitch.
i'm blaming you personally if Mikey gets eaten by the vampires.
ANYWAYS, LOVED the update. the charcters are so full of raw emotion and i can feel it!
twitches u better update soon!
my friend is reading this too and she's missed the last 8 updates. it' annoying. Enough with my problems! i'm REALLY, REALLY, REALLY glad that ur wrist are better. i didn't want you to hurt yourself updating, u shouldn't even have tried it.
and now I realize how ridiculously long my reply is so i'm gonna shut up now and leave with these words: I LOVE YOU!!!!!
Author's responseWell now I'm rather nervous...
The last eight updates? Wow. She's pretty far behind, haha.
And thanks for the comment; I loved it
(#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-02-27 02:04:42 PMeye twitch Holy mother crapper! I love your round-about way of writing that sex scene. You did it perfectly. hugs I'll probably end up doing the same thing in one of my stories...ANYway, when Gerard grabbed the bottle, instead of Frankie, I was TWO SECONDS from being arrested for murder. OF GERARD!!!! laughs But then he poured it out...when they find Mikey (WHY THE HELL DID HE RUN AWAY AT ALL OF THESE TIMES??????), he'll be pissed at his lack of vodka. Mikes needs to come back and apologize for being mean to Gee. And...I think that Mikey is freaking out because 1) Alicia's pregnant. 2) Alicia's leaving him. 3) Alicia's DEAD!!!! Ha, I don't know. But great chapter, hunny.
Thanks for the dedication. sniggers AK-47...I'll never get tired of that.
Oh, yeah. I SAW MOTHERFUCKING MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE LAST NIGHT!!!!! HELLZ YEAH!!!!
Author's responseHaha, you make me laugh. BECAUSE YOU'RE WRONG!!
(#) purecrystaltears 2007-03-01 03:45:20 PMWow. Okay, I just read this whole thing today. It's amazing! I typically never read fanfics about bands, because I've just never found that interesting.
Yours is the very first band fanfic I've ever read. And I'm in love with the story!
You are SUCH an AMAZING writer! The story just draws me in. It's fantastic! It's like I'm reading a book. You put hints of things that are coming in later chapters, making me want more. You don't put everything in it full out, and you put in character's emotions.
I love how Gerard and Frank didn't just jump each other right off the bat. You were careful with it. It seems more like a real situation, and it's fantastic how you did that!
You put in Lincoln a little bit at a time, slowly edging him into the story, as well as many many questions.
This story is amazing! It's extremely well written! You're writing is fantastic, and I can't wait to read more!
Sorry if you're getting bugged with the bunches of compliments. :) I figure I should give you a bunch, since I love it so much, and because I didn't review for any of the earlier chapters when I was reading.
I hope to read the next chapter soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!