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Gaara's Sand Castle

by Leandra_Roone 3 Reviews

You would think that someone who can control sand could build a decent sand castle...ironic, isn't it?

Category: Naruto - Rating: PG - Genres: Humor - Characters: Gaara - Published: 2007/02/26 - Updated: 2007/02/26 - 1691 words - Complete

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  • Gaara's Sand Castle

    (#) makani 2007-02-26 02:18:28 PM

    The concept of Gaara, master of sand, never having made a sand castle in his life is amusing and in all probability correct. I didn't see major grammatical errors, the and flow of the description and dialogue seemed logical, but there was one thing that bothered me about this story: the way Gaara and Temari dismissed water. Coming from a desert, where water is rare and no doubt precious, I have a hard time buying the fact that any of the Sand siblings would write off any amount of fluid as 'just water.'
  • Gaara's Sand Castle

    (#) Nightsahdow 2007-02-26 03:20:32 PM

    Ahhh, that was cute^^
    I loves it!!!!

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