(#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-02-14Damn. The rest of my review got cut off. I MEANT to say, you may want to put "...Erm, I'm not gay." Like that. In quotation marks. It seems more professional, and it may make more people want to read this story. Just a tip. Please update soon, and great job.
(#) StormRavyn 2007-02-27Very good and well written. I like the structure of the story and the plot has potential. The chapter is too short and seems to end without anything occuring, as in there is no point to it, but I'm assuming that's because this is the prologue. If it is then it's fine. I'm looking forward to the next update!
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