THIS IS THE END - don't flip out though, cause i'm working on the sequel - so everybody breathe. lol. i think alot of you are going to be upset but it fits the story - just read the title.
You better do a sequel or i'll kick your ass.
ahh! but yay!
boo for the ending, horray for a sequel. i absolutely loved this story.
omg!! I can't believe that just happend!!!! i'm in shock! Patrick really is a dumb ass in this story. I can't wait for the sequal and thanks for the AMAZING!!! story. Keep up the awesome work!
oh my g-d! that was the perfect ending, but it sucks it had to end! thank g-d shes starting a sequel!
this is the end??? sequal peas??sheesh. depressing much. good story none the less.
Ok, I made the slight mistake of reading a couple of the reviews before I actually read the chapter, so I can't say I'm 100% shocked, but I am now extremely depressed. My only saving grace is that I know you are writing a sequel and I KNOW you will end that one happy... right? Well, you better...
Patrick really needs to stop worrying so much, sheish. Anyway, I loved it as always. You better start this next story soon, dearie! (Wow, I'm being extremely demanding and threatning... totally not in my character, lol) A point to you!
In slow motion: "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Get writing that sequel right now missy, or I'll set Patrick's Cookie dough on you....
nice story goin on! keep going! i wanna see wat happens next.
i loved reading this story =]
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