(#) Paranoia_Woman 2007-06-17I'm bad. I admit it. I've read and thoroughly enjoyed it without commenting as I should.
Your story is excellent. I love how combative Ed is toward everyone and everything. Feisty.
I should of commented earlier, I'm sorry. I would like you to continue this story at some point. I enjoyed the flow of it and I'm wondering what's happening with Winfry. Poor girl. A mechanic stuck in a magic world. Well she is use to alchemy so it shouldn't be too hard for her to fit in.
Really continue if you can.
(#) Aimikirono 2008-04-14I'm 'strolling' through all the fictions for this anime and I found yours stands out more in my very short list of the good fictions. The twists are very fascinating as you mix FMA and HP into one. It sure kept me awake to read them all. Surely there is gonna be a continuation? Please do... I really would like to read more of this one....
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