Brock talks about his time with Ash and why he stays. One shot.
- I like the way this opens, but past that point it feels kind of like a general summary of Ash's travels. It's pretty general and doesn't say much new about any of the characters. The writing is good but the story seems lacking all the same.
Author's responseThe point was to be general. It was just supposed to be a new point of view of Ash, from those who knew him best. I actually liked this most out of all my one shots.
(#) Faeriegirl 2007-04-24 12:29:28 PMReally insightful into Ash's character. Sorry if I'm getting annoying, I review every story I read, cos its nice to get reviews :S will stop if you like.
Author's responseNo, I like reviews, even bad ones. They help shape the story. I'm glad you liked it.