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Chapter 10 - 'Sorry.' Shouldn't Cover It, But It Does...

by whatkatydid 6 Reviews

Things reach a peak...

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2007/03/29 - Updated: 2007/03/29 - 1898 words


  • This Isn't What You Wanted.

    (#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-29 10:05:53 AM

    No faith you say? My dear, you are very wrong! I thought it was really fantastic. Seriously. I was holding my breath through most of it (which I suppose is fitting considering all that happened). Anyway, you really make me understand Pete's hurt and anger and all that and not just be pissed at him for being a jerk.

    Soooo... I can't wait for more!!! (Sorry for my sucky review, I'm just not in my groove or something today) Have a point for origionality and go write!
  • This Isn't What You Wanted.

    (#) LOVELA 2007-03-29 12:45:51 PM

    Holy Crap! KATY! That was spectacular! I was practically holding my breath through that whole chapter, which almost caused me to pass out as well, which would have been horrible because then I wouldn't have been able to finish reading the chapter to see Pete finally getting the help that he needs. He IS a lost boy. Yay for Bea for sticking by him. That's the soul of an angel right there.

    If you don't have faith, fear not, Katy, because I have faith in you! I always have.

  • This Isn't What You Wanted.

    (#) peterpanswore 2007-03-29 01:08:56 PM

    have faith. you are an amazing writer and i know you said you don't fish for encouragement and such but i give it freely because i love this story.
  • This Isn't What You Wanted.

    (#) AshleyIsAwesomeo 2007-03-29 04:36:13 PM

    Wow. I really like this story. =]]
  • This Isn't What You Wanted.

    (#) MMMramen 2007-03-29 04:36:31 PM

    I'm glad to see you didn't give up on this one. I wasn't sure if I'd be seeing an update ever again. You've made my day. Interesting twist, Katy. I did not see that all. I don't know why you doubt yourself. You always write beautifully. This chapter was no exception. I love the ending too. Point for my favorite brit. :)
  • This Isn't What You Wanted.

    (#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-01 03:39:59 PM

    I so dug Bea giving Michael a piece of her mind. A very vivid scene, Britain.

    pure stylistic pleasure:
    why did her act of heroism sound like she'd signed his death certificate anyway?

    Forgive me for finding this comic:
    "They're probably..." Patrick stopped, remembering it was his Mom there.

    Have my imaginary rating point. Obviously you don't want my real one...

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