Things reach a peak...
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-29 10:05:53 AMNo faith you say? My dear, you are very wrong! I thought it was really fantastic. Seriously. I was holding my breath through most of it (which I suppose is fitting considering all that happened). Anyway, you really make me understand Pete's hurt and anger and all that and not just be pissed at him for being a jerk.
Soooo... I can't wait for more!!! (Sorry for my sucky review, I'm just not in my groove or something today) Have a point for origionality and go write!
- Holy Crap! KATY! That was spectacular! I was practically holding my breath through that whole chapter, which almost caused me to pass out as well, which would have been horrible because then I wouldn't have been able to finish reading the chapter to see Pete finally getting the help that he needs. He IS a lost boy. Yay for Bea for sticking by him. That's the soul of an angel right there.
If you don't have faith, fear not, Katy, because I have faith in you! I always have.
- I'm glad to see you didn't give up on this one. I wasn't sure if I'd be seeing an update ever again. You've made my day. Interesting twist, Katy. I did not see that coming...at all. I don't know why you doubt yourself. You always write beautifully. This chapter was no exception. I love the ending too. Point for my favorite brit. :)
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-01 03:39:59 PMI so dug Bea giving Michael a piece of her mind. A very vivid scene, Britain.
pure stylistic pleasure:
why did her act of heroism sound like she'd signed his death certificate anyway?
Forgive me for finding this comic:
"They're probably..." Patrick stopped, remembering it was his Mom there.
Have my imaginary rating point. Obviously you don't want my real one...