(#) GwenMerlon 2007-04-02This story is so sad and yet so captivating all at the same time. I'm sure you mean for it to be going that way, and I just need to comend you on your work!! I absolutely love the style of your writing, it really captures the character's feelings and awkwardness unlike any I have ever read. You should be proud!
Anyway, I rated, because you're just amazing like that, and I hope you update soon. ;)
Author's responseWhy thank you for the rating and review. I adore them almost as much as I adore your stories (don't let me get away with not reviewing your lastest chapter of "The Mistake" I've been meaning to get to it since you posted it the other day).
"sad yet captivating" I like that. With Lindsey I really just aim for maintaining a character different from the ones that are in most stories. She's got a dark past and is far from perfect. There's a lot I try to keep in mind when writing her character, mostly though instability.
- I love the little insights into Lyndsay's past. Just so intriguing.
As beautiful as always xx
Author's responseI really liked writing the flashbacks. I think they help show how Lindsey's past has made her who she is. I think they provide just enough information so everyone can see exactly why she acts the way she does. IF they don't accomplish any of this though, lol, someone let me know. haha.
- Ohhh! This little inklings into the past make me wanting more! I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm interested in seeing how Lindsy gets along with all the boys...especially Andy!
Author's responseI'm glad you like the flashbacks. I wasn't sure how else to portray Lindsey's past to my readers while at the same time keep Lindsey from talking about it. I'm glad it has worked. Oh, and there's definitely chapters to look forward to dealing with how she interacts with Andy in comparison to the other guys. It pretty much like you're reading my mind.
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