- right... fist off.. eval FICWAD -_-... right reviewingness:
1. I rock? no dude... u rock... (ps im still hyper... i mean robbles, chester nd mikey hyper so i warn you now!)
2. vicky isnt the only one hus good on a dance mat is she now geets: o_-
3./"See? That's what you get for tickling me!" I smiled.
"Well, it was worth it.""/ omg thats soo sweet .. im grinning crazily :P
4. "Claire, Helen, ---Georgia---, Mia, Ben and Josh again crazy grin and u know why :]:]:]
5. ""Oh course you can. Let me just change into my corset, and we'll be off." " lol idk why but this tickled my funny bone big time.. lol corset.. HA! :]
6./What are you thinking about?" Brendon asked, finally breaking our silence.
"You."/... omg meltsss so sweet and just OMG ( im having an OMG day 2 day as u can probs tell from earlier:P)
7./ Once Brendon and I were out of the shower and we had dressed each other/:|.. O_O enuff said... or not said... tehehe! ;)
8./Instead of replying to him, I just got on the dance mat and chose a much harder song to dance to. / THAT was ace it was like yesss payback (cheezy grin nahnahnahnahnah :P:P:P).. but in a nice way!!!
9. I CANT BELIEVE U DIDNT LIKE THE CHAPTER :|.. i did and ohh look so did everyone else! so :P
10. next chappi= PARTY wooooo HEHEHE.. hyperness seeping through but geets.. i luvs this fic...
its " just like heroin"... (a great grey daze song actually :]) but yer.. updates r like well appreciated.. big time .. CHOCOLATE present big time ( just dont go dropping it ;)lol!)
(ps WHAT IVE DONE RULLEZ and so does rob nd chester nd mike!).. that is all :P
Author's responselmao, FicWad has been annoying me, lol. yeah, u do rock, and thanks! hmmm... (not going to answer that, cos im not BRILLIANT) lmao, im a sucker for romance, i put it in all the time :P haha, yes "Georgia". it tickled mine too, and my random bone, lmao. again, the romance! oh god, did u HAVE to say that!? yeah, payback!! well, it was so hard to write, I duno why, and thanks! yesh, a party! lmao, thankyou again! Geets xx
(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-04-06I read it! FINALLY! Yesss! Haha.
Oh, and thank you for the dedication at the top of the chapter. You're so sweet! XD And so was this story! I love the image of Bren playing DDR. So cute! I can see it now, tongue sticking out, all determined. Haha. Oh and of course I love how you added one of my favorite Brendon looks: scarf, glasses... total sexiness. Mmmm...yeah. Haha.
I liked this chapter. Too cute. Can't wait for the par-tay! Woo! ;)
Author's responselmao, Ficwad has been annoying. haha, you do paint quite a picture of brendon... omg, I put that in 'cause I LOVE how he looks with scarf and glasses, lmao!! thankyou ever so much :D par-tay, woohoo!!! haha
- Pardon my language but...
how the FUCK did i not know this was updated? hits own head im so so sorry...i should've checked earlier!! God, i'm loving this so far...but this chapter was short! i was like NO! IT'S OVER ALREADY?! gah! lol.
i'm really looking forward as to what happens in the next chapter (aka the party i guess? lol)
and i love the scenery you described.
Author's responselmao, you are pardoned, haha. its ok, I forgive you. sorry, I know it was short, trust me, the next one is longer! Yeah... dunno if that place exists though! haha. Thankyou!! Geets xx
(#) blueside21 2007-04-09wow i just read the story before this and this story and im in love! the way you portray you characters give the story a realistic feel about it.
The Plot in the first one was so believable, that i felt i could be the next lucky girl to meet panic!
Keep up the good work!
Author's responseomg, thankyou!! you read all that?! wow, I feel so happy right now!! It really means alot! god, I feel like I might meet them any day too, haha! I'll keep writing if you keep reading!
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