Kayli makes a huge decision
(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-17 03:44:37 AMI just love reading the to and throwing of a relationship. Poor Kayli's inside war of "Should I? Shoudln't I?" mentality is just great, you wrote it beautifully.
I also like how you've portrayed Pete's vulnerability. It was refreshing and original. Have a rating point and a British pinch on the bum.