Patrick and Lola sitting in a tree...
(#) Bridget 2007-04-18 09:45:56 AMdamn you with your Patrick in his manties. HOT DUDE!
kissies. and water. and kissies in the water.
and patrick totally kissed her and then backed outta it...idiot.
write. more. now! (please)
I promise I will write 2 more chapters tonight if you write more.
needless to say I loved this one...except for the last part 'cause the last part didn't result in more then kissies...although Patrick damnnnnnnn probably looked hella hot wet like that.
Author's responseI knew you'd luv the manties. I know I do. I'm already starting my next chapter, so you better deliver, woman!
(#) danceislife 2007-04-18 12:53:33 PMhaha assignment...
"I sighed and stared up at the spackled ceiling. A crack slashed through its surface, which went nicely with the scuffed walls and questionable carpet stains that would cause a black light to explode. Sure, it wasn't the Ritz Carlton. But we sure as fuck weren't NOFX" - SOOO FUNNY!!! I cracked up!!! I've spent the night in a hotel like that...oh man...
Author's responseShady hotel rooms....I shudder to think about it. Glad you thought it was funny. I thought the NOFX thing might offend people, but that's OK. :)
- hehe. "manties" i will try my darndest to use it today. but i'm sad now, pete had better get his act together soon.
Author's responseYay! Soon manties will be part of American lexicon. Pete will get his act together eventually. Thanks for the review, sweetness.
- Kyle, Kyle, Kyle. You are amazing and I'm in a listing mood.
First: Wow....manties....that's awesome!
Second: Patrick wet = SWOON!
Third: Alright, who's the douche? Patrick started the kissing! Stupid boy!
Fourth: UGH! Why is it that Pete is always getting in the way of our character's love lives?? Stupid Boy!
Fifth: I love you! Ratings and smooches my dear!
Author's responseCeCe, CeCe, CeCe. I love your lists. Now go update Forever Feels Like Home. I need some JB goodness. :)
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-04-18 03:14:35 PMYou. Are. Amazing.
I absolutely adore this story- surely by now you know this. And damn Pete and his ability to ruin everything even when he isn't around!!! Grrr.
Author's responseThank you Miss Gwenie...err, Gwen. I love making Pete ruin things. Is that weird?
(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-19 03:05:19 PMEr No, no nono no, go back and re0write it....but for my eyes only. And this time, Patrick doesn't exit the pool - you got it? Good....
But I loved it ( secretly ) I maybe even squealed a little. xx
Author's responseHAHA! I can't rewrite it, but there will be some Patrick and Lola love soon enough.