when good things go terribly wrong
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-01 05:21:58 PMI laughed when I read about you draining your phone battery checking reviews. I do the same thing checking for updates on stories, and I just wanted to tell you that yours is one of the stories I kill my phone for. Please keep updating, it makes class go faster. Oops, I didn't say that.
I really like the way this story is going, and I think it's an interesting plotline. A lot of celebrities have very secretive romantic lives, and I think you're giving a good example of what that must be like on the other end.
(#) whatkatydid 2007-05-03 02:07:25 PMHey, I'm annoyed because I reviewed this chapter, in fact, I think I was the 1st or 2nd person so I don't know why it's not here.
I couldn't stop reading this chapter, what I liked about it was a bit of insight into how they're both concealing the relationship. I think Pete would be just as hurt if he found out that Kayli didn't tell her Mom about him and was almost forced on a date with another guy ( how did the date go BTW? Did she go, cos I wasn't clear...)
great drama and frankly, Pete's reasoning is very futile. Can't wait to read the next chappie!
Sorry for the balls up! You know I love your writing - wouldn't miss it for the world ( oh, and if FicWad doesn't let me know, or doesn't let you know, or doesn't post my reviews..) Yeah...tell me 'bout it.