Categories > Celebrities > Fall Out Boy > I Need You by My Side

You're all I've got

by getup_n_go 5 Reviews

when good things go terribly wrong

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres: Drama, Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2007/04/30 - Updated: 2007/04/30 - 2270 words

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  • I Need You by My Side

    (#) watch_the_sky 2007-04-30 02:04:28 PM

    that was really good, it was a great look into her side of it. and i really liked the elaboration on his eyes and the way they portray his emotions. keep up the good work.
  • I Need You by My Side

    (#) patricksgirl84 2007-04-30 03:48:49 PM

    Loving it. Will Pete break her heart in the end?? I feel bad for her having to keep everything a secret.
  • I Need You by My Side

    (#) danceislife 2007-04-30 06:29:26 PM

    Grade C...hilarious!!!

    I can totally feel for her. Why can't they just be out in the open? Oh...nevermind...
  • I Need You by My Side

    (#) ssketchator 2007-05-01 05:21:58 PM

    I laughed when I read about you draining your phone battery checking reviews. I do the same thing checking for updates on stories, and I just wanted to tell you that yours is one of the stories I kill my phone for. Please keep updating, it makes class go faster. Oops, I didn't say that.

    I really like the way this story is going, and I think it's an interesting plotline. A lot of celebrities have very secretive romantic lives, and I think you're giving a good example of what that must be like on the other end.
  • I Need You by My Side

    (#) whatkatydid 2007-05-03 02:07:25 PM

    Hey, I'm annoyed because I reviewed this chapter, in fact, I think I was the 1st or 2nd person so I don't know why it's not here.

    I couldn't stop reading this chapter, what I liked about it was a bit of insight into how they're both concealing the relationship. I think Pete would be just as hurt if he found out that Kayli didn't tell her Mom about him and was almost forced on a date with another guy ( how did the date go BTW? Did she go, cos I wasn't clear...)

    ANYWAY

    great drama and frankly, Pete's reasoning is very futile. Can't wait to read the next chappie!

    Sorry for the balls up! You know I love your writing - wouldn't miss it for the world ( oh, and if FicWad doesn't let me know, or doesn't let you know, or doesn't post my reviews..) Yeah...tell me 'bout it.

    xxxxxxxxx

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