- I like the way in this chapter you point out that Fratley is extremely valuable to Burmecia for keeping Puck from going on a rampage, for being a diplomat and generally just a good person. This doesn't, of course, really make it much easier to like him.
I hope you write more soon. I eagerly await the next chapter.
(#) Sindeniirelle 2005-06-13This is brilliant. I honestly think this has got to be the best Final Fantasy fanfiction on the net. Flawless writing, excellent characterizations, great descriptions of the settings, and the dialouge is spot-on. It manages to be sad and exciting, atmospheric and moving, and it definitely has me wanting more. Not to mention that your original character is _not_ a Mary Sue, but actually fits remarkably well into the canon universe. I await the next chapter!
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