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Secret Ritual

Every night, Alister does the same thing. Valon/Alister shounen ai. One shot.

Category: Yu-Gi-Oh! - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Romance - Characters: Alister, Valon - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2005/11/09 - Updated: 2005/11/09 - 1580 words - Complete

Reviews

• Secret Ritual

  (#) cke-banb 2005-11-26 03:24:08 PM

  "Valon is a packaged deal wrapped in playful sugar and thuggish musk."
  
  That was the best line in the entire story, in my opinion. The way you worded that was simply marvelous. I liked this pairing also, since it was original, and you pulled it off well. You've done a very good job, and your writing is descriptive, and I especially like the metaphors you use. Great work, and I hope to read more from you soon.
  
  If it isn't too much trouble for you, please read our story, and let us know what you think. Thanks a lot, and this was a great story to read!
  
  CKE

• Secret Ritual

  (#) AaAaChiKitA 2006-03-02 01:19:13 PM

  this was awsome. really well written

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