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I wont let them take you

by XxlovefrankieroxX 1 Reviews

Frank and Gerard form a strong friendship but then Frank gets kidnapped - will he get home, asnd will it make their friendship stronger?

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar, Frank Iero, Gerard Way, Mikey Way, Ray Toro - Chapters: 10 - Published: 2007/05/07 - Updated: 2007/08/12 - 7759 words - Complete

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  • I wont let them take you

    (#) renthead 2007-05-07 01:31:02 PM

    I have a couple things to say:
    1. Try grammar. The plot is a good one, but it would help if we(the readers)could understand it a bit better
    2. Capitalization "I Won't Let Them Hurt You" not "I wont let them hurt you" It looks neater that way.

    otherwise, good story!

    Author's response

    Thank you for the criticism (I'm not being sarcastic either!) I'll try to improve on my grammer and stuff! ^^

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