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• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) watch_the_sky 2007-05-16

  ahh! right now i am entirely too excited to leave a review of substantial praise so ill be back .. when i stop jumping up and down with excitement!

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-05-16

  I wet myself.
  
  I giggled....hard, which causes my incontinence to worsen.
  
  I wish Kate and Patrick would sort this out, I can't STAND her talking about her baby being Joe's! Hey! She would get along great with Petra! They could share big pants together! LOL
  
  Alex, I loved it as usual, sorry it's not a more productive review, oh, and never apologise for taking your time to do an update! It was totally worth it, plus, I know how super busy you've been!
  
  Hook up soon?
  
  xxx

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) danceislife 2007-05-16

  She seriously needs to tell him the baby is his. NOW

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) Melim 2007-05-17

  Alright so, reading this, I kinda miss college, cuz most of this chapter is like inside jokes and random stuff that nobody really understands but us. Yeah. Your impatientness with this chapter doesn't really show, and it came out pretty good. It was funny and touching at the same time, and everything that we discussed is going to be really good.
  
  And just for the record, totally Team Joe.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) patricksgirl84 2007-05-18

  I've been waiting for an update. I really enjoy this story. Thank you for writing. :) Love the interaction with everyone.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) ssketchator 2007-05-29

  There are entirely too many things I love about this chapter to list. The short list is as follows:
  Big pants.
  All the ways you know you're in love.
  Kate screaming at her fetus.
  Pete scrapping the original video.
  Onstage antics.
  
  Etc, etc, etc. Love it, love you.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) GwenMerlon 2007-05-31

  Ok, my favorite here: "You will stop making me sick now BECAUSE I INVENTED YOU!" She commanded the fetus. Yes, I can just imagine her saying that. I mean, truly.
  
  Ok, so again, superb writing. I loved the 'you know if your in love bit'. It was perfect. (See, now I'm trying to distinguish between this chapter and the last one I read, I'm very sorry if I get them confused) And the fact that in the end he decided that, alas, it was only his penis in love. Plus the Pete/ Ashlee comment and how he sheepishly relies that they were just friends, while we all know very well that they are not... pure genius.
  
  Rock on concert! I bet it would have been a fabulous one to attend. And I can just see the last song in my mind's eye. I'm glad that they're both realizing that they're kinda in love. It's time... I mean, they're both just so incredably stuborn.
  
  Pants!!! Big Pants!!! :) LOVE IT!
  
  Ok, well, you're amazing but you're already well awair of this fact. Seriously I can't wait... so I'm going to go ahead and reread an already read chapter (thus the 'reread'... I'm an idiot sometimes) LOVE YA!

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