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The Last Good Thing We Had Was Tainted By Your Pride

by indie_chicky 6 Reviews

Second chances they don't ever matter, people never change. Once a whore you're nothing more, I'm sorry, that'll never change.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: R - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [X] - Published: 2007/05/25 - Updated: 2007/05/25 - 872 words


  • Disheveled

    (#) prissynblack 2007-05-25 04:47:27 PM

    FIRST REVIEWER! finally!

    OMG! that was so good!

    Once again you come back with a brillant outstanding chapter! I think your a great author and I wish i could write like that! I loved how you put what melody was saying inbewteen what ryan was doing to brendon. i totally understand whats going on! SO awesome!


    before i explode.........
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    (#) xSoMeOnEx 2007-05-26 10:12:31 AM

    i aboslutely loved the chapter.
    had been waiting for it for so long.
    i finally like melody, she did the best thing when telling Ryan.

    rates :)
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    (#) Danishgirl9 2007-05-26 10:18:19 AM

    Oh my god! YIKES!
    This is good! You should really post this on libejournal in the slash at the disco community. They would eat it up :P
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    (#) meeniemoe 2007-05-26 03:52:15 PM

    TANTALIZING. That's the word for the end of this chapter, woman!!
    How dare you leave us like Ryan...just leaving...the next morning? We need EXPLANATIONS, so I'm expecting some in the next chappie. :)
    I love the way you kind of portrayed both Brendon and really makes the split 50/50, like, none of us REALLY knows who's gonna give in first...
    And I think they should finally give in and get together. Or Jon or someone should set up a plan to make one of them say sorry, please take me back, yadida.
    But...yeah. XD I love this fanfic!
    Keep updating!
    xoxo, nat.
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    (#) kristina1 2007-05-27 01:16:11 AM

    omg I love it!!!!!
  • Disheveled

    (#) BurlesqueQueen 2007-05-28 06:17:28 PM

    Way to leave me hanging!
    Get writing, because I NEED more of this. Please. :-)

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