Give me a shot to remember? No, just change the cartoon channel!
(#) MCR_dynamite 2007-05-26 04:19:46 AMLol, funny chapter! Ah, that Frankie! shakes head
There were so many funny parts in that that I can't even remember most of them! =D
I really like your writing and the whole idea of the story!!! It rocks!!! -Jessie xox
Author's responseaw, thank you so very much for your pleasant review! you rock!!!
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-05-26 11:15:23 AMis it okay to get your comp screen and everything else all wet when you laugh so hard that all the water from your mouth comes out?(not that that happened to me,just asking..switchy eyes)
oh dude. what can i say,im loving it all the franking way. they say its hard to make ppl laugh,but you dude have nooo problemo. thumbs up ohh,and i like Al muchly too^____^
keep it coming,i get all jumpy-dancey everytime i see a alertmail on my mailbox!^___^
Author's responseoh stop it! you're making me blush!! (my way of saying- keep going) glad you like AL! maybe i should look into a career of a comedian? what do you reckon?
(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-05-26 12:39:05 PMThis was so funny! I loved the part about her pillow.(Not MY PILLOW!). I had tears in my eyes from laughing! Seriously- Great work!!! Its okay if you dont write X rated scenes or even R rated scenes. I like how you skipped over it, by making her conviently 'black out'. And I liked Ray saved the day... You know I didnt even notice he wasnt there when they were baking. waves apologetically to Ray now update!!----xoxo
Author's responseshakes head at you how could you forget ray, savior of the drunken four? your review made me smile! if i made someone cry with laughter my job on earth is done!