- Ha! You can't get anything past Kyle and her super powers of deduction. I love that pic, by the way. OK, moving on, here's a little list of what I liked:
1. Sarah's momma. Ice cream and peanut butter products could end the world's problems...especially hunger. Not AIDs though. That virus is tricky.
2. Any story with Crystal is a good story. The dialogue was just perfect as well.
3. Sarah in a dress! Need I say more?
4. I liked how her attention and focus immediately went to Patrick. And with good reason.
5. Playing volleyball in a dress. Awesome.
6. Patrick playing volleyball in a dress...awesomeer. OK, that didn't happen in this chapter...but I'm still hopeful.
7. "I'm Patrick"...."Good"
That made me smile.
The feeling of complete elation is taking over my brain. In other words, welcome back, love.
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