At Kohona High, nothing's easy. Sakura's scared of some creepy teacher, Sasuke's romantically confused, and Naruto is writing poetry.
Make the chapters longer. Your character potrayal is good but I really would like to read something I had to scroll down on. It just makes the story more attractive to readers.
(#) Shank 2007-08-23
i would have to agree with the last review it is an interesting idea and i look forward to reading, but its over so quickly. keep them coming though
cool story good plot and everything ....but i agree with Shank...(Shank?...WTF) anyway if you could make the chapters it would be rated a 5 in no time....
by the way how old are you...just out of curiosity
I agree with the Shank,CatWAt,and Inuyonas if you make chapters longer it grabs the readers attention more but good story.
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